如：The Musuem is very beautiful中的beautiful很抽象；改为The Musuem is magnificent就更形象具体； 说The job is very difficult to do不如说The job is very challenging. 词汇彰显深厚的语言功底 。
要注意阅读中留心积累富有表达力的词汇 。
I decided I would pioneer a new 。

15、 way, explore unknown powers, and unfold to the world the deepest mysteries of nature.I read all the books I could find that threw light upon these matters.Located in southern Austria, Kitzbuhel is a paradise for skiers.Even though the altitude of the city is not enough to guarantee snow, the good w 。

16、eather and breath-taking scenery make it a world-class ski resort.o 3、语句简洁流畅：“简洁流畅”不等于句子简单呆板 ， 无变化 ， 而是指意思表达清楚 ， 语言地道精练 ， 读起来通畅上口 。
高考书面表达要求100词左右 ， 所以不能说废话、说糊话；每句话都必须精练 。
例如：o Li Hua is a student. He comes from Wuhan. He speaks Wuhan dialect. We find it hard to understand. 这段话看似简洁 ， 其实很呆板 。
可以修改如下：Li Hua , a student 。

17、 from Wuhan, speaks Wuhan dialect, which we find hard to understand. 修改后的句子 ， 除了简洁流畅 ， 更加地道精练 ， 句中既有同位语 ， 又有非限定性定语从句 ， 表达灵活 ， 富有变化 ， 体现了良好的语言表达技巧 。
o 4、逻辑衔接自然：为了使文章结构紧凑 ， 自然流畅 ， 段落之间要使用适当的过度语；句子之间要使用合理的逻辑衔接词 。
如：It was very noisy, I could hardly go to sleep.这句话可以修改为：It was so noisy that I could hardly go to sleep / I cou 。

18、ld hardly go to sleep because it was very noisy / As a result of the noise, I could hardly go to sleep / Wirh so much noise, I could hardly go to sleep 等等 。
o 5、表达灵活多变：一篇好的文章 ， 要尽可能使用较多的词语和句式结构 ， 如：定语从句、插入语、倒装句、强调句、被动结构和其他常见句型 。
如：Many people believe that we should keep our own tradition可以换成It is widely be 。

19、lieved that we should keep our own tradition. We know very little about the accident 可改进为Very little is known about the accident.This is the best hotel you can find here可以改为You cant find a better hotel here或Nowhere else can you find a better hotel.We can solve the problem only when everybody takes a 。

20、ction改为Only when everybody takes action can we solve the problem会更好 。
o 6、深刻的引语：在文章的开头和结尾适当使用名言和谚语 ， 可以起到画龙点金、深化主题的作用 ， 提高文章品味 。
Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the image of a city.On the other 。

21、 hand, the rest 40% think that fees should be charged, because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.Everything has two sides. In my opinion, fees should be charged as long as the price is reasonable.Yo 。

22、urs trulyLi Hua书面表达常用步骤一、审题；定要点：注重表达要点的用词 。
用词体现语言基本功 。
用词要生动具体形象；避免抽象普通词汇 。
二、连句；串要点：注重连词和句式变化 。
句与句之间尽可能使用连接词 ， 使文章连贯流畅；尽可能使句子多样化 ， 避免呆版 。
三、组篇；重结构：注重过度语和主题句 。
适当分段和过度语使结构紧凑 ， 思路清晰 。
示例讲解o 最近一项调查显示 ， 我们学校40%以上学生不吃早餐 。
o 原因：熬夜 ， 早晨没有胃口；早晨时间来不及；女孩为保持身材 。
o 危害：课堂精神不振 ， 打瞌睡；影响身体和学习 。
o 建议：自己写范文参考o A recent survey shows that over 40% 。

23、 of students in our school go without breakfast, which is indeed a worrying problem.o Different reasons account for this phenomenon. On the one hand, many students have the habit of staying up too late at night, as a result, they are not so spiritual and have no appetite for breakfast the next morni 。

24、ng. A lot of girls, on the other hand, starve themselves on purpose just for keeping a good shape.o Ignoring breakfast is very harmful to both our health and study. For one thing, they are still growing , for another, they cannot concentrate their attention in class through lack of sleep.o To solve。

25、this problem, we should have a scientific study plan and keep a balance between study and relaxation. Only in this way can we guarantee a happier life and better study.经典赏析1o In Western countries, the dragon is an evil (邪恶的) animal. It often kills good people. So, a Shanghai professor said that the。

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